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11 January 2013 @ 10:43 am
DW FIC: Yes  
titleYes
author charlottetrips
characters First Doctor, TARDIS
rating & wordcount G, 372
author’s note written for who_contest drabble challenge #18 “Yes.”
summary For the longest time, all he heard was “no.”


The quiet seemed laden with expectation. The feel of this shipyard varied greatly from those of the newer models. There, the air was filled with erratic energy, as the ships vied for attention, showing off their latest gadget and newest trick. Here, in this yard full of Type 40 TARDISes, there was a sense of peace and knowingness lying heavy around him.

He’d been given an opportunity to match up with a 53 but having stood in the control room, reaching out to the core of that newer model, the arrogance and narrow-minded sentience of the ship had put him off. He wasn’t interested in creating further connections that would ground him to this stultified existence.

His fingers trailed from one ship to the next. Curiously, he noted that his heartbeats had sped up and that his breath had shortened to a slight degree. That had never happened to him before. Actual emotion was foreign to his kind. Was this in response to the situation at hand? Was this due to the fact that what he had in mind, a crime that hadn’t been perpetrated in his world for hundreds of years, was going to be done by his own hand?

He shrugged off the slight regret at the thought. He didn’t want to be stuck on Gallifrey. He wanted to explore the lands and times that he’d studied about. He didn’t want to just be a lord over Time, he wanted to experience it, he wanted to—what was that human saying?—be up to his elbows in it.

In this first life of his, he’d been hindered, stopped and denied his basic right to inquisitiveness, to looking for himself. Well, he thought as his hand found the latch open of this ship, I will be denied no more.

His mouth dropped as he pushed open the door and stepped in. His eyes lit on the spacious control room of this TARDIS, the warm glow of the walls and the console in the center and his mind felt the welcome of a kindred spirit. He was unaware of his first words to this ship though she would remember it for eternity.

“You are the most beautiful thing I’ve ever known.”
 
 
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     Mandy: Eleven - Doctor-Tardisa_phoenixdragon on January 12th, 2013 02:53 am (UTC)
Ahhhhh, this is perfection.

Thank you, thank you...

*HUGS*
no matter how improbable: 10 and TARDIScharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:26 am (UTC)
thank you!
icecreamlova ¯\(ºдಠ)/¯rosaxx50 on January 12th, 2013 10:16 am (UTC)
Aww. The Doctor loves his TARDIS already.
no matter how improbable: tardis very nicecharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:36 am (UTC)
i know. the doctor's relationship with the tardis is special
kaffyr: TARDIS loveskaffyr on January 12th, 2013 11:28 pm (UTC)
Oh, my. Oh, my yes. This one is just beautiful. Thank you for writing it.
no matter how improbable: tardis bad wolfcharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:38 am (UTC)
thank you so much :)
locker_monster: Mad Man with a Boxlocker_monster on January 12th, 2013 11:40 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was so perfect.

He was unaware of his first words to this ship though she would remember it for eternity.

Best line. :-D
no matter how improbable: tardis smallcharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:39 am (UTC)
thank you :)
Singe Addams: Singe by angstslashhopesingeaddams on January 13th, 2013 12:44 am (UTC)
and the his mind

GASP! Typo. The rest was absolutely endearing. Thanks!
no matter how improbable: tardis very nicecharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:40 am (UTC)
le gasp! must fix.

Thank you!
cks321cks321 on January 13th, 2013 06:07 am (UTC)
This is perfect.

Thank you for sharing!
no matter how improbable: 10 smilecharlottetrips on January 13th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
thanks for the review! :)
the silver lady: Doctor Mew One by gritsinmiseryacciochocolate on January 13th, 2013 11:11 pm (UTC)
re: Yes
A lovely little story. :)
no matter how improbable: 10 smilecharlottetrips on January 15th, 2013 07:15 am (UTC)
Re: Yes
Thanks! I appreciate it
Who?Muse: DW Doctor Wondertardisjournal on January 14th, 2013 03:28 pm (UTC)
When you find the right one, you just know.

Lovely!
no matter how improbable: tardis smallcharlottetrips on January 15th, 2013 07:17 am (UTC)
Yeah, I'm sure that that's how that feels :) thanks for reading
fannishliss: the Doctor songfannishliss on January 19th, 2013 02:03 pm (UTC)
I just love how the Doctor and his Tardis are uniquely suited to one another. I think the other TT capsules must be just as you describe here. That feeling of recognition between the two of them is lovely the way you describe it here.

I don't even like to refer to any other TT capsule as a Tardis, because I think the Doctor's ship is one of a kind, and I kind of go by the idea that Susan coined the term Tardis just for her. :D
no matter how improbable: 10 and TARDIScharlottetrips on January 21st, 2013 07:27 am (UTC)
You see, part of my problem in writing this was I have so little knowledge of Classic Who. (I had to go google TT capsule!) And I didn't know it was Susan who'd coined "TARDIS!"

All I had in going forth with this prompt was my love for the Doctor and TARDIS relationship.
fannishliss: Tardis Nebula Stole a Time Lordfannishliss on January 21st, 2013 12:05 pm (UTC)
You finessed it beautifully. :D
witchy woman: drwhopaynesgrey on January 20th, 2013 04:40 pm (UTC)
Loved this! Wonderful job. I love seeing beginning pieces where the First Doctor steals the TARDIS.
no matter how improbable: tardis very nicecharlottetrips on January 21st, 2013 07:32 am (UTC)
Thanks! I enjoyed exploring it
Eli-chan: TARDIS stole a Time Lordsilverlunarstar on February 8th, 2013 08:55 am (UTC)
Oh, this is just GORGEOUS!
no matter how improbablecharlottetrips on February 10th, 2013 07:19 am (UTC)
Thanks dear!
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